I quite like this song as just a light acoustic breezy number and would probably keep it as such. Maybe get Kieran to make some better guitar and Chris to play the shaky egg properly (shaky egg is actually VERY hard to play) and hell, maybe even get Neil to do some funky moving bass. But apart from that keep it pretty much the same. Although the mid is supposed to be a bit more buildey and epic and needs more backing vocals and just 'stuff'. Also, maybe more words? I was singing this one quietly because the children are asleep downstairs. Ssh!.