This is one of the best songs I have written I think, though it does not come across properly as a demo. The chorus words are just filler to be honest, and the solo is just to tell you that there should be a solo happening. Still there is something about this song that I really like. I like the first verse lyrics and the chorus melody and the solo chords. What else? Er? I don't know exactly. Yeah, I just like it alright! Stop asking me to explain everything all the time!